JeRmZ's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[In The Sand]

Good Work

Good animation and clever idea.

Foxcato responds:

thanks

[(U)UnKnOwN Intro]

HAHA

hey, this is darkness(U) :P
whatsup? is the clan still around?

MaThRiX responds:

Hey darkness!! Yeah clan (U) is still around, but I miss the old days, now (U) is so fuckien dead... anyway, how come u never on msn?! I want to talk to you, please get back on msn!! and add me! [e-mail], see ya around.

[own3d Pics]

Was okay... but

This is hilarious, but I hate you, let me tell you why,
just because people haven't submitted a Flash, doesn't mean they are clueless to what a flash could be, I have only 1 submitted flassh movie, because I don't submit my good stuff to NG, I used to want to submt stuff, like a year ago, but now I just want to write reviews to help people get better. This is.... not even a flash, it's just a slideshow, it was fun to laugh about it and stuff, but still, its just a slideshow, so before you tell people to make their own flash, make your own. OWNED.

To improve yourself, try watching other movies, and see what they are doing, to hlp you get an idea on what you should do, because from the looks of this, you have no idea what a flash movie should be like, good luck in the future.

ZaKoo responds:

I udnerstand you.. But i have made several flashes.. just for fun.. not to be good.. i have them on another site.. they just cant stay on NG! Im glad that u give me tips, i just write that u havent made a submission to those who just says "this suck".
I often watch other movies, but u still dont learn much about Flash Programs ;) so its sorta hard to learn from others that way.. and there are few that wants to teach you stuff.. Thanks alot, i mean it

[Disgaea: Episode 1]

Well

I just beat the game, and I was upset that it ended too, but if you wanted to make a tribute, you should do sumthin that is animated, that would be 10 times the coolest. Well, good work on this, I'm glad someone made something on this game, cuz its.... a good game lol. Good luck on your next one, and please include female voice actors lol, its just not the same.

MaKd responds:

I agree, I will try to get female voice actors.

[You are dreaming.]

Thats wierd..

I didn't know what a lucid dream, but when I read the definition, its what happens everytime.

good job, not much for the flash aspect of this, but very informative

PureCarnage responds:

Yeah, it's my experiment, so far I am pleased with the results.

[CT: Fall of Guardia Part1]

All I can say is

Love Chrono, not loving this.
Most people like the story part to everything, always wanting to know whats going on. This = too much story, i think. for story 4/5.
would be 5/5, but the kind of story you use, is, over used.

BUT

0/5 for battle scenes, they pretty much sucked. You can't really say much about the battle scenes. The most one lasted was about 5 seconds...... and they arn't really all that well animated. I can see why they sucked, because basiclly all you've done before are final fantasy sprites, and they have like 2 battle frames?

Me? I'm a battle kind of guy. So I didn't find this flash very interesting... 2/5 Overall.

Improvements:

Work on your battle scenes, please, and I will vote higher next time. Work on the quality of sprites, and take the time to edit stuff in photoshop, emulator screenshots don't work for backgrounds.

PS - Not everyone submits all their flash onto newgrounds. I have only submitted one of my crappy ones, but I have a couple stored up in my Flash folder. How do you know if people have done a flash before, you havn't. They just havn't submitted one to Newgrounds.

To people that say this is not front page material: I've seen worse on the front page than this, the reason? It's Fulp's choice, he happenned to like this, so he put it on the front page

Yeah.... I think thats all I have to say, other than: congrats on front page.

Good luck on your next movie.

- Jermz

Vinstigator responds:

Thank you, I'll see what I can do about the battle scenes :)

[The Adventures Of SBC 1-1]

Okay

I don't get why? or who has raped you and the clock/lock crew when u were children, but it has to stop. Sure, the clocks used to be fun, but they are old now. And, I don't think Strawberry clock is the king of the portal anymore....... yeah....... better luck next time?

SamFisherClock responds:

shut up! SBC is and will always be the king of the portal.

[Transparency - Episode 2]

Nice

Near the end, Dezer looks like he's wankin it, comedy GOLD. I give you a 10 on humor :)

FenixFlashFilms responds:

That's an awesome review... If I could rate reviews, I'd give you a 10. Even I didn't notice that.

[-TheTrio-]

Good Art

I'm a bit jealous of your art skills, but your animating skills sucks no offence, it was very hard to watch, because normally it wouldn't take that long to shoot a guy. If I was there, "Ahh, fuck it" and shoot the people like there was no tomorrow, good art, bad idea, work on ur animating skills, and basic thought of a timeline, and your work will be Godly.

poxpower responds:

yes.... well your plot sucks as well. Sorry. I know most kids on ng like to see people shot at each other for no reason, so I though I'd have some people not shot at each other for no reason. Clever, eh?